Sleep Paralysis

Sleep Paralysis

A poem by Sydney Stone. I do not own the image.

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The sound of slowly falling drops,

Like the errant hands of clocks,

Marks slow passage of the time,

Starts the tingling up your spine,

Who is that sitting there-

With grotesquely hanging hair?

Crouched in corner, eyes alight,

Staying just beyond the light.

Hard for you to see them clearer,

Look you not into the mirror,

Your mouth hangs open, silent screaming,

As upon you dance small creatures teeming,

You cannot move, cannot speak,

As floorboards nearer to you creak,

Your soul is there for them to take,

Until the blessed moment you awake

4 responses to “Sleep Paralysis”

  1. mentalnotes1 Avatar

    Wow, this has an eerie, creeping tension that builds so well. The rhythmic, almost hypnotic flow of the lines pulled me in, mirroring that slow, dreadful realization that something else is in the room. The lines “grotesquely hanging hair” and “small creatures teeming” is disturbingly creepy 😳
    The best part is how it plays with perception. The mirror line is a standout, suggesting that looking might make things worse. The ending left me holding my breath, only to snap back with that relief of waking up… but even then, it lingers.

    It’s got a very Poe-like or classic gothic horror feel. If you were aiming for unsettling yet beautifully crafted terror, you nailed it!

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    1. Sydney Stone Avatar

      Thank you so much! That is high praise indeed! 😁

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